"The
Nestike Forest Affair"
By
Commander
Viac am Malacar del Kalix, AGXCC
Chronicler
A17th
150th Valkyrie Ranger Battle Group
Sil
Xennonoc, Isle of Kalix
Introduction
Okay,
now I am going to take you back to the beginning, with the 150th, and
start to tell some of the stories about them, and how we came to be.
This is the first in the series, and it tells the story of the start
of the Corps.
You
recently read "A New Day, Love Returns" - that is the
answer to this one. Here is where we lost Jen.
It
is originally written on Sophocles Screen Writing, which tells you
why it is formatted the way it is.
Enjoy!
Vivi - A17th 150th VRBG /
Kalix
©
Copyright
WGAW #868085
1998 - 2002
"THE NESTIKE AFFAIR"
ACT 1 - THE OPENING SALVO'S
THIS OPENS AT
OKTECK. LIKE ALL ARMY CAMPS, THIS
IS TYPICAL.
PICTURE WHAT YOU WOULD SEE AROUND ANY ARMY BASE
CAMP, LESS THE
MODERN TRAPPINGS. BASICALLY BARRACKS, MESS
HALLS, FIELD
HOSPITAL, DRILL FIELDS, AND ALL THE REST.
This is the base
camp of the 26th - 730th Valkyrie Corps
(VKC). Grand
Commander Kerricar (KERRI) is in command.
INT. KERRI'S
OFFICE - ABOUT FOUR PM - LATE AFTERNOON
FIELD UNIFORMS
ALL-
FADE IN
They have just
returned from a practice skirmish with the
16th - 740th
Corps, and Kerri is not happy with the results.
Vercan (VER),
Gencon (GEN) and Malacon (MAL) are standing
there in the
office....
Before Kerri's
desk..
<Jena
(Jen)
is Mal's executive officer>
Jennacon is seated
off to one side
Kerri is pacing
back and forth like a caged lion...
Behind the desk...
KERRI
(rather upset)
NOW
what was that all about? You
guys
just stunk the place up!
Vercan
- your first Battalion
couldn't fight it's way out of an
open
field!
Kerri turns and
points to Gencon-
KERRI
(continuing)
AND
YOU Gencon - what was third
thinking about? I have never seen
such
bad formations - you were cut
down
before you actually got into
action!
Kerri wipes his
brow - looks at a map hanging nearby - then
turns to point at
Malacon-
2.
KERRI
(continuing)
Malacon - you are NOT the whole
CORPS.
You did an admirable job -
but
you forgot to cover for the
other
two Battalion Commanders.
The three
Battalion commanders look a bit sheepish at the
drubbing they are
getting. Jennacon (JENA) rises to
Malacon's defense-
JENA
Commander - if you please?
KERRI
Jennacon?
JENA
I
think the Second Battalion did
rather
well today - and if the
other
two had requested assistance -
we
would have come to their aid.....
KERRI
(cutting her off)
YOU
are not to wait when your
brother Batallions are in a jamb,
Jena -
You should be watching the
action
around you.
MAL
Commander - we were occupied at the
time.
I can not watch everybody
else's
performance when I am
running my Battalion.
KERRI
YES
you did do very well if I must
say
so. BUT we would have lost the
other
two Battalions at the rate
they
were going down.
Kerri looks
disgustedly at the other two Majors -
Then he continues-
KERRI
(continuing)
IF you
other two Majors can not
find
the way - then I will find
other
officers to take your place.
Kerri looking
directly at Mal and Jena-
3.
KERRI
(continuing)
AND
you two - I want you to work
with
these two and their staffs to
get
them in shape - RUMOR has it
there
is a MAJOR fight coming up -
IF
this Corps goes down - YOU are
all
going down with me.
Kerri motions
towards the door-
KERRI
(continuing)
NOW
get out of my sight - and DO
SOMETHING with this CORPS! - -
DISMISSED!
The four standing
there now salute - then leave.
EXT. JUST OUTSIDE
KERRICAR'S OFFICE -
The four start
walking away -
MAL
Jeeze
what a sore head! I didn't
think
we did that badly!
JENA
Well
it wasn't pretty - but we
didn't
lose the whole thing!
VER
You
guys were just showing off today!
MAL
Excuse
me?
VER
So
what was that "funny move"? You
made
at the end? We were all
watching your lines and I guess we
forgot
ours..
MAL
OH
that! That was something we
borrowed from the Black Forces - why?
VER
BLACK?
You guys turning into the
enemy
now?
<<Black
-- Black Forces, is the "Quipolleth" - one of the other
"Kingdoms" like us, the Kerenth. They have a nasty habit of
invading us, is it our shorthand way of refering to them.>>
4.
MAL
Nope -
just trying new tactics -
and it
worked just fine. Why don't
you
guys come over and we will show
you
what we were doing today!
GEN
Well
maybe later - right now I got
some
ass chewing to do on my own. I
thought we were ready - but I guess
we
weren't.
MAL
Gen -
if you want my opinion - your
lines
need work. Close up tighter
like
we did. Then attack from the
center
out.
VER
So you
want to critique my Batallion?
MAL
Nope -
wasn't watching you - I
thought you were more experienced -
so I
just left you go out there and
get
clobbered.
VER
Thanks
for nothing Mal -
MAL
You
graduated before I did, so I
thought you'd have more time before
the
mast as it was - and had
something up your sleeve.
VER
Frankly - if you ask me - I had the
plan -
but my company commanders
didn't.
JENA
Look
guys - this isn't getting us
anywhere fast. Kerri is probably
right
on the big fight coming....
MAL
(cutting her off)
AND
just what do you know about that?
JENA
Well
if you let me go on Mal.....
5.
Jena reaches into
her dispatch case - and pulls out a map.
She spreads it out
as she speaks-
JENA
(continuing)
I was
at headquarters the other day
and
caught a drift of some
conversation, and when I left, I
noted
it on my maps...
Now spread out on
the ground-
JENA
(continuing)
Here
it is - the Nestike Forest.
She indicates on
the map-
JENA
(continuing)
Rumor
has it the Black 210th and
214th
are massing someplace near
here.
They aren't sure where
exactly - or how many of them there
are...
GEN
If
that is correct - then the guys
coming
back from leave were right!
VER
Gen?
You know something about this?
GEN
Well
yes and no. I had a couple of
guys
from "A" company come back and
tell
about a large group of Black
Forces
- just beyond the Realm's
boarders - in that general area.
MAL
So you
didn't think to make a
report
to somebody about that?
GEN
Well
not really - they weren't
sure -
who or what it was - just a
large
formation of footmen from
what
they could tell...
VER
HOW
LARGE WAS IT GEN?
6.
GEN
Couldn't say for sure - maybe TWO
HUNDRED? Maybe FIVE HUNDRED?
MAL
THAT
is reportable! If they were
that
close to the Realm - where
were
they?
GEN
Well
they were about here-
Gen indicates on
Jena's map - just below the Nestike Forest...
GEN
(continuing)
About
THIRTY miles due south of
Nestike - and moving away from the
Realm...
MAL
That
was a scouting party you fool!
VER
That's
awful big for a scouting
party
Mal...
MAL
All
right then - it was a raiding
party.
Something is definitely up!
VER
How
can you be so sure Mal?
MAL
When I
was a sargent - we ran into
the
Black 40th - in just the same
manner
- and it turned into a
skirmish - but the flag had gone
up -
and other forces were
dispatched to deal with it.
GEN
So you
think something is going on?
MAL
If my
guess is right - and you guys
are
with me - let's set out a small
scouting party of our own....
7.
JENA
(cutting him off abruptly)
MAL -
if you do that Kerri will
really
cut you a new ass hole -
he's
already warned you about not
being
the whole Corps.
MAL
(looks surprised at Jena)
So
what would MY LADY wish us to do?
JENA
If you
guys are cooking something
up I
would let Kerri know - and let
him
make the decision.
VER
Jena -
why don't you go and tell
Kerri
what you know - and we are
discussing - that way we don't get
in the
line of fire!
JENA
Thanks
for nothing guys - I
suppose - -
MAL
Lets
get out of here anyway and
have
dinner - then we can think
this
over at my place....
GEN
All
right I guess - we should do
something about our Battalions
first
however
VER
Right!
Lets go and give them the
bad
news first! Then we three - er
four -
can talk about Nestike...
MAL
Agreed! About eightish at my
place
- and don't raise a stink
about
this to anyone till we get
more
info --
JENA
Also
while you guys are giving your
groups
a going over - ask if anyone
knows
something about any of this -
any
small details will help.
8.
Jena rolls up her
map - then the four leave for their
respective command
groups..
FADE OUT.
INT. MALACON'S
OFFICE - DESK - SEVERAL CHAIRS - ETC..
IT IS NOW ABOUT AN
HOUR LATER.
Present are
Captain's JEROD of "E", of HELCOR of "H",
HERNIN of "G"
and BELOR of "F", along with Mal, Jena, and
soon to be joined
by ERICA Mal's Tac...
The junior
officers are all antsy, as they had heard about
the working over
their Commander got at Kerri's office
earlier....
The four juniors
are seated, they rise as Mal and Jena enter -
Field uniforms,
all
FADE IN:
JENA
Ten
hut!
All rise
MAL
At
ease gentlemen!
The group sits
down. Mal and Jena sit behind Mal's desk -
Mal at center -
Jena to the right side
MAL
(continuing)
All
right guys - we did a good job
today!
The boss was pleased with
our
performance - but - who was
watching the others?
BELOR
(inquizzically)
Others?
MAL
Yes!
Others - who was watching the
other
two Battalions?
JEROD
Like
we had time to watch the other
companies? I was worried about my
own
men Mal...
9.
MAL
Look
guys - we have to start
watching our other members of our
Corps.
Ver and Gen got into trouble
on
either side of us, and Kerri
wasn't
happy we didn't go to their
aid...
BELOR
Pardon
me - but isn't that what you
Major's are supposed to be doing?
You
guys are the Group Captains -
and I
thought one of your duties
was to
watch the flanks for problems..
MAL
Ya
well - I guess it may be - -
anyhow
- just keep your eyes open
from
now on, and let me know by
field
signal if you see something
going
wrong...
JEROD
I
guess we can do that for ya - so
what's
the plan Mal?
MAL
Well
if you see something going
wrong
- either send a runner - if
you
can spare one - or signal me by
distress flag - two wags up and
down -
followed by the direction -
twice.
I'll have Jena watching for
your
signals...
JENA
Oh
good! Something else for me to
do on
the field..
MAL
Jena -
you are covering my back -
and if
nothing seems to be
approaching from that quarter -
look
around.. but don't get too
involved - I'll have Vironica and
Ellison keep a watch on their
quarters as well - - while I watch
the
frontal zone, as well as the fight.
JENA
That
sounds good to me - I just
didn't
wish to be the only lookout..
10.
MAL
That
settled - we have other
problems on our hands - one of the
results of today's fight was we are
to do
something about training the
other
two Battalions..
HELCOR
Oh so
now we have to train the Corps?
MAL
Well
yes and no - I want you to
have
your Lieutenants take over
your
training times, and you four
to go
over to the other companies
and
try to teach them some of our
moves.
HELCOR
There
are only four of us - and
eight
of them - how do you want to
work
this out?
MAL
Well -
I'll talk with Gen and Ver
and
find out what they need - if
you
ask me - we need better
officers - but you didn't hear me
say
that - and you don't repeat
that
to anyone..
JEROD
All
right! I tend to agree - but
Ver
has always seemed to me to be
something not quite what he is on
paper
MAL
I know
- but I didn't make up the
promotion list. Bitch to upper
echelons - not now - - also
speaking of now -
Mal motions to
Jena to pull out her map-
MAL
(continuing)
Jena -
would you show us what we
think
is coming our way?
JENA
MAL -
this isn't official - just
scuttle butt - -
11.
MAL
Jena -
we may as well let them
know -
and maybe we can get more
information -
JEROD
So
what's up skipper?
MAL
The
brass have been making noises
about
some big fight coming with
the
Black Forces in about a month
or so
as rumor has it...
JENA
Well
for what it is worth - here's
what I
have overheard and some
intelligence I have gathered - it
looks
like this..
She bends down and
spread the map on the desk, and indicates
as she is talking
JENA
(continuing)
For
what this is worth - this is
not an
intelligence briefing, but
merely
something for now to keep
your
eyes and ears open for..
Pointing to the
Nestike area-
JENA
(continuing)
It
seems some guys coming back from
leave
saw about TWO HUNDRED to FIVE
HUNDRED Black Footmen about THIRTY
miles
due South of Nestike -
whispers at command sound like
something is in the wind - from
what I
can gather - from my own
sources - it's the Black 210th and
214th
- all total about TWO
THOUSAND footmen someplace near or
around
the Nestike Forest. They
don't
know where they are exactly -
or
what they are doing.
HELCOR
Oh so
that is what that was!
12.
MAL
(looking surprised
and shocked)
Helcor? What do you know about this?
HELCOR
Well I
was with the guys from "A"
and we
were coming back from leave
about
a month ago -
MAL
(cut him off)
A
MONTH AGO?
HELCOR
Yes -
and well - Ver didn't think
much
of it - -
MAL
(Now very upset)
VER
DIDN'T THINK MUCH OF THIS? - I
knew
he got his bars by political
wrangling - but this is intolerable..
JENA
Mal
settle down - when I go up to
talk
with Kerri tomorrow - I'll
mention all of this - - all right?
Helcor
- go on..
HELCOR
Well
like I said - we were coming
south
from the Summerlands, and
took a
detour through the Nestike
forest
and when we went over Nabia
Point,
we could look down into the
Black
Territory - and they were
just
camping there - about TWENTY
miles
distant, in their sector..
MAL
(Now getting really
worked up)
TWENTY
MILES from the REALM? What
kind
of camp was it?
HELCOR
Well
Mal, it looked like one of
ours -
only they are more
disorganized. If you ask me, it was
just
manouvers..
MAL
What
do you mean manouvers?
13.
HELCOR
Well
it looked like they were
getting ready to skirmish with each
other
- we didn't stay long enough
to see
much..
MAL
NOW
wait a minute - if they were
out
playing army - and they were
THAT
close to our borders - this
means
they were practicing for an
invasion . .. AND VER didn't think
much
of that?
JENA
Wait a
minute Mal - it was Gen who
said
the total of the men was - TWO
HUNDRED to FIVE HUNDRED - do you think?
MAL
THINK
- I think the two of them are
working together - which is why
they
did so poorly today - anyway -
go on
Helcor..
HELCOR
Nope -
he just blew it off..
MAL
Jena -
get this all down - Helcor -
who
else was with you at that time?
HELCOR
Well -
there was Vitak and Flant
from
"A" and Detis from "C"..
MAL
Jena -
go and talk with them in
private separately and find out if
this
all tallies..
JENA
All
right Mal- when?
MAL
The
sooner the better - we may be
into
this faster than anyone knows -
Erica
enters dressed in barracks
uniform
ERICA
So
what's up guys?
14.
MAL
It
seems we may be getting into
something big fast..
ERICA
So
what's the story?
JENA
Well
it seems Kerri has this notion
that
there is something big up -
and we
are finding out it may be
true -
ERICA
Like
what?
JENA
What
do you know about the Nestike
Forest?
ERICA
Big
place - next to the border with
the
Black - several raids have come
from
there in the past -
MAL
But
what have YOU heard lately?
ERICA
I
don't know if I can talk here
about
that Mal...
MAL
Out
with it!
ERICA
Well -
the intelligence unit found
several articles of Black uniforms
in
that area about two weeks ago,,,
MAL
TWO
WEEKS AGO??? Why haven't we
heard
about this - does anybody
know
what is going on?
JENA
Mal
settle down - this isn't your
Corps
- it's Kerri's - so let's
just
put this all together and
tomorrow we will see...
MAL
All
right - go on Erica-
15.
ERICA
The
thing seems to be building up
to
something - but no one knows for
sure
at this point... and that is
all I
know..Sorry
MAL
All
right Erica - just keep your
eyes
and ears open - for anything -
especially watch Gen and Ver - we
may
have double agents..
ERICA
MAL -
they are both good officers - -
MAL
And
good spies - if they didn't
think
to report this - then we have
a
problem in our own Corps..
JENA
I tend
to agree - why didn't you
tell
us about this Helcor when you
got
back?
HELCOR
Because Gen and Ver were sitting
together and they said not to tell
anybody about it... I don't know why..
MAL
KNEW
IT - just knew it - all right
you
guys - if we get into a fight -
just
do your best - we just may be
the
entire Corps... from the looks
if it
now..
ERICA
Well
what do you want me to do Mal?
MAL
I want
you to dig up anything you
can on
those two - you being Tac
and
not intelligence would not
raise
much of a flag if you were
looking at old records.
ERICA
All
right Mal - you?
16.
MAL
I'm
going to co-ordinate this whole
thing
- Jena- you get busy with the
interviews - and you four keep your
mouths
shut - about the Gen/Ver
thing,
and ask around your own
companies if you can dig up
anything on any of this... and do
it
very quietly.
The four captains
all agree to start working on this
immediately..
All leave except
Mal and Jena-
MAL
(continuing)
Well
kiddo - we got problems - I
want
you to start on this right
away
and get back to me soonest.
JENA
All
right - what about the other
two
coming over tonite?
MAL
Forget
it - make up some kind of
excuse
and get rid of them - I
don't
want them around this office.
JENA
You
are on! - I don't like the
looks
of either of them either.
MAL
Meet
me back here after midnight -
I have
some things to do.
JENA
(knowing what is on
Mal's mind)
You
want a messenger?
MAL
(with a smile)
Always
my Jena - yes my Lady -
right
away!
Jena now leaves
and sends a messenger into Mal-
In a few moments -
the messenger arrives-
17.
MAL
(continuing)
I want
you to take a message - and
deliver it secretly at once-
MESSENGER
Yes my
Lord!
Mal writes a coded
note - (seen on camera)
Inside - Kerri -
have info - G/V - X2 - Nestike - urgent -
midnite - 3C -
//ss// MAL
Outside - Grand
Commander Kerricar - 26th - 730th
He seals the note,
and hands it to the messenger - who
salutes - and
leaves at once.
FADE OUT.
INT. KERRI'S
OFFICE
JUST BEFORE
EVENING MESS A MESSENGER ARRIVES AT KERRI'S OFFICE
Barracks
uniforms - all
FADE IN:
Kerri is seated
behind the desk, his clerk shows the
messenger in --
The messenger
hands him the sealed note.
Salutes - Kerri
returns it.
Then the messenger
leaves
Kerri opens it -
reads it-
KERRI
GRANDO
- get my things ready - we
are
going out tonite..
GRANDO
What's
up boss?
KERRI
It
seems my guess was right!
GRANDO
Guess?
18.
KERRI
We
have a spy in our camp - I knew
Malacon would smoke them out!
GRANDO
Malacon?
KERRI
Grando
- he's one of the best and
brightest I have - mark my words
some
day he will be a grand
commander - he is just about
running this Corps as it is -
anyway
- put out our black
uniforms - and meet me here just
before
midnight - and keep your
mouth
shut about any of this!
GRANDO
Yes
Sir!
FADE OUT.
END OF ACT 1
ACT 2 - INTO THE COLD
IT IS NOW ABOUT AN
HOUR LATER - MALACON HAS CHANGED INTO A
BLACK PRIVATE'S
UNIFORM, WITH A HIDDEN SCABBARD FOR A SHORT
SWORD, AND A
DISGUISE.
<<I
would like to slip in a note here. Valkyries because of their dual
sex nature, can appear as either male or female depending on the
individual. Most choose to remain in the "female" look.
Mal, because he has the spy ring, and to look more like the
Quippoleth, chose the "male" look. The QP does not have
many "fem" looking people, and is extremely martial -
therefore a "fem" appearing in their midst, would stand
out. This is how Mal hides who "he" is.>>
EXT. BASE CAMP
FADE IN:
He slips out of
the base camp - and heads towards the border
with the Black
Territory.
Just as the sun
sets, Malacon enters a dingy road house.
DISSOLVE TO:
19.
INT. A RUN DOWN
DANK ROAD HOUSE - POPULATED BY "LOWLIFE"
FADE IN:
Mal slips into the
road house, and walks up to the bar.
He surveys the
people sitting around, and then orders a
tankard of ale.
Taking the ale, he
moves towards a table with a seedy
looking man
sitting there alone.
MAL
(quietly to the man)
Evening DEROD! - How are things on
your
side of the world?
DEROD
Ah!
Sargent Malan! - and how is
your
world? Please sit down!
Mal sits in a
chair close to Derod..
MAL
Long
time no see old friend! - I
need
some information!
DEROD
And
just what would that be?
MAL
I need
you to spy out what is going
on
around the Nestike area... let
me
know who is working the area -
how
many - and whatever they are up
to..
DEROD
No
problem - the usual fee?
MAL
Twenty
pieces of Gold if I remember..
DEROD
That
will do - how soon do you need
to
know?
MAL
Soonest if you can manage it old
friend.
DEROD
Probably about in a week I can give
you
the layout.
20.
MAL
That
would be just fine. Just
remember I need it all -
DEROD
Yes,
just as in the past!
MAL
Contact me when you have it, in the
usual
way.
DEROD
All
right - just remember - if they
ever
figure out it was me - -
MAL
Yes
Derod - I will cover for you -
you
know if you ever get into a
jamb -
I'll do for you what I did
for
Kenah.
DEROD
How is
the old boy doing these days?
MAL
He's
enjoying a fine retirement in
our
Summerlands, working as a host.
DEROD
That's
good. Do you have a retainer?
Mal reaches into
his pocket and pull out a few coins.
MAL
Here's
five pieces of Gold - the
rest
on delivery.
DEROD
Very
good kind sir! - In a week then!
MAL
In a
week...
Mal now finishes
his drink, and slips back out into the gloom.
FADE OUT.
Walking down a
darkened alleyway - he slips into another
doorway.
21.
INT. ANOTHER DARK
AND DINGY PLACE - THE LITTLE LIGHT SHOWS
THAT THIS IS A
VERY EVIL PLACE.
MALACON HAS
SLIPPED INTO A BLACK BROTHEL.
FADE IN:
Mal walks up to
the Matron -
MAL
(quietly to the Matron)
Evening GERTL, so how's business
tonite?
GERTL
(quietly back)
Ah
Sarge - long time no see! -
Business has been good.
MAL
You
know why I am here - what have
you
got for me?
GERTL
How
much is it worth to you?
MAL
Depends on what you have..
GERTL
So ask
and I'll tell you what it's
worth..
MAL
Nestike
GERTL
About
ten pieces of Gold.
Mal reaches into
his pocket and retrieves the coins.
MAL
Will
this do?
GERTL
Just
fine! - Black 210th - 214 -
should
be ready to attack in about
a
month or so - if the boys are right!
MAL
How
good are they?
22.
GERTL
From
what I can see the usual
drivel
- press gangs - and forced -
they
have been having problems
getting them to attack properly
MAL
From
where are they coming?
GERTL
I
don't know - but just keep your
eye
out!
A burly Black
footman enters -
Mal steps back
just a bit
Gertl takes care
of her customer -
Gets him settled
in a room -
Returns to Mal
GERTL
(continuing)
Just
be careful - they are looking
out
for spies from the Realm -
MAL
Why?
GERTL
Information is flowing back thru
here
from someplace inside one of
the
Corps - and I don't know any
more
about it than that - so don't ask.
MAL
Thanks
-
GERTL
Just
get out of here before
somebody figures out who you are.
MAL
(smiling at her)
Thanks
for the information - I will
be in
touch my Lady.
GERTL
Nite
Sarge.
MAL
Nite
Gertl
23.
Mal now slips back
into the Realm... making his way past the
outposts and back
to his own barracks..
It is nearing
midnight..
FADE OUT.
INT. MAL'S
QUARTERS
FADE IN:
MAL CHANGES HIS
CLOTHES - AND PUTS ON HALF BARRACKS UNIFORM.
(TOP HALF)
FADE TO:
EXT. ROAD INTO
OKTECK
He then makes his
way into Okteck - and slips into the
"Three
Crowns" - an old inn - and walks slowly into the
backroom.
INT. AN OLD INN -
"IT WAS TYPE OF PLACE" - NOW A MORE THAN
WORN OUT HOSTELRY.
As he enters the
back room, in the dim light -
Two figures are
sitting there. -
Kerri and
Grando - black field uniforms
FADE IN:
Mal enters -
MAL
Ah!! I
see you got my note!
KERRI
Well
what have you been up to?
MAL
You
know I never let the boss
know -
been busy. Things to work out.
KERRI
So how
does it look?
MAL
Dark.
Very dark. Your guess was
right,
and I think I know - but it
will
take a week or so to confirm
what I
already have guessed.
24.
KERRI
Then I
was right?
MAL
Yes -
but I have more details - it
is the
210th-214th - we have about
a
month.
KERRI
And?
MAL
And
what? Just go with that for now.
KERRI
All
right - I will go with your
information for now - you have been
right
in the past... how do you
come
up with this stuff?
MAL
Ah!
That is rule # one - never let
the
boss know where you have been
or
what you have been up to!
KERRI
(smiles and with a
little laugh)
Serves
me right for asking.
MAL
We
will have more information
shortly. I'll let you know as this
gets
on, and more details as I can
confirm them.
KERRI
At
this rate - there may be a star
in the
for you!
MAL
Thanks
for the offer - but for
right
now we got bigger things to
work
with. Let Kernin know that
there
is something big coming his
way,
in about a month - we will
need
about three Corps to run this
one
down.
KERRI
Three?
MAL
Just
go with what I have told you!
25.
KERRI
All
right, but what about our
internal problem?
MAL
I'm
working on that right now - let
you
know in a few days.
KERRI
Mal -
you know if anybody found out
about
any of our..
MAL
Kerri
- I know - just trust me for
now..
KERRI
Since
you were a Sargent, I have
found
you to be a loyal footman -
and
now as an officer - even a
better
source..
MAL
Thanks
- let's get out of here -
before
somebody spots us - -
Mal now leaves -
first - checking the main room as he leaves.
He slips into an
alcove near the door just as Grando and
Kerri walk into
the main room..
Suddenly - a
figure lurches at Kerri-
Mal springs out
from his hidden lair-
Pulls his short
sword and makes quick work of the interloper.
KERRI
That
was close - know him?
MAL
Yup -
one of the Black double
agents
- well he won't tell - not now..
KERRI
Any
more in the room?
MAL
Nope -
those are my men.
Mal's men dump the
body in the alleyway out back -
Kerri and Grando
return to their quarters.
26.
Mal hands the
innkeeper three Gold coins to insure his silence.
FADE OUT
INT. MALACON'S
QUARTERS
MAL NOW RETURNS TO
HIS QUARTERS.
It is way past 1
am. Erica and Jena enter.....
Erica and Jena
- Barracks uniforms.
FADE IN:
Mal is getting
ready for bed -
JENA
Well I
guess you were right!
MAL
So
what did you find out?
JENA
The
information is right about the
Black
forces.AND - they have a new
Commander..
MAL
OH?
How did you find that out?
JENA
Never
ask! - Anyway his name is
Major
Duroc. It seems he just
shipped his Oak Leaves - and is
eager
to make more.
MAL
Oh
good! A new officer trying to
make a
name for himself! This ought
to be
a good fight! - So Erica what
did
you find out?
ERICA
Well -
there is a lot of "smoky
stuff"
in both of the Majors past.
MAL
Like I
didn't already figure that -
so go
on..
27.
ERICA
Gen it
seems was taken captive
awhile
ago, and was released
without the usual prisoner exchange.
Ver on
the other hand has been seen
many
times working with the Black
Forces, and his last command
reprimanded him for not doing his
duty
when it would have been an
easy
fight to finish off the battle.
MAL
All
right Erica - I want you to dig
someplace around in command - check
archives to see if either of them
had
spent any time other than
captive in Black hands - or has
something else in their past which
would
make them suspect.
ERICA
All
right - anything else.
MAL
Not
for you right now - just keep
your
ears open
Turning to Jena-
MAL
(continuing)
Jena -
I need you to dig a bit in
the
other Corps from which these
birds
came - there may be somebody
over
there who knows something and
isn't
talking.
JENA
All
right - so where have you been?
MAL
Busy -
good thing I stripped that
uniform off that Black footman
years
ago....
JENA
I see
- never mind - I don't want
to
know what you have been up to.
You
should be careful, you are
getting to be too well known on the
other
side.
28.
MAL
Which
is why I always go alone - to
hide
better - and to expose fewer
people
to the danger.
Mal now stretches
- yawns - and
MAL
(continuing)
Well
let's get some sleep -
tomorrow may be another full day.
JENA
Yup -
long day coming
ERICA
Night
you two!
Erica leaves....
Jena and Mal get
ready for bed together...
All retire for the
night..
FADE OUT.
END OF ACT 2
ACT 3 - THE ACTION HEATS UP
INT. MALACON'S
OFFICE
THIS ACT OPENS IN
MALACON'S OFFICE AFTER MORNING MESS.
Barracks
uniforms - all.
FADE IN:
Mal is sitting
behind the desk, reading reports, as Gencon
and Vercan walk
in-
VER
So
just where were you last nite, Mal?
MAL
Out
visiting a sick friend from 17 -
why?
29.
GEN
Oh we
were just wondering - the
meeting was called off - and Jena
said
you were out someplace....
MAL
I
don't think my movements are your
concern anyway - but - looking at
your
training reports - you have
some
work to do..
GEN
So you
have taken control of the Corps?
MAL
No -
if you remember Kerri said we
were
to work with you two and get
you up
to speed - so I requested a
copy
of your reports - -
VER
I
don't need anybody to tell me how
to run
my Batallion...
MAL
So
that's why you knew the routine
and
your Captains didn't?
VER
(angrily at Mal)
Look
Mr. Rules - I run my own shop
in my
own way - and stay out of my
group...
MAL
(growing hot at Ver)
So
that's why they didn't get the
message?
VER
I'll
take care of my own - just
what
do you see in the reports
which
makes you think otherwise?
MAL
Well
it says here you haven't been
working on lines - or barge..
VER
So?
30.
MAL
That's
the problem - also you need
to get
your men to work together -
and
not fight each other...
VER
(cutting him off)
I do
my job - that's all that matters
MAL
(rising and pointing
at Ver)
YOUR
JOB is to make sure that men
don't
fall needlessly. NOT just be
an
officer, strutting..
VER
(explodes at Mal)
I
don't have to put up with this...
Ver leaves
abruptly
GEN
(congenially)
Well
that was nice..
MAL
Ya -
Well your reports aren't quite
as bad
- Barge is all right - lines
can be
a problem..
GEN
I know
- my troops are basically
Green
but I am working on it - -
MAL
Have
Captain Helcor stop over and
show
you how we do it..
GEN
Which
reminds me - what was that
Black
move you guys used?
MAL
Oh
that - that was a fighting
retreat - with a barge thrown in
for
good effect - See you start to
pull
back - like you are getting
out of
there - then when they start
to
cave towards your center - -
pull
them apart - on either side of
the
lines - then barge -- works
every
time.
31.
GEN
Oh I
see - kind of like a double barge?
MAL
Yes,
that is basically the idea.-
You
come in from either side of the
thinning lines - then "cut off the
bag"
at the neck where they are
streaming in.
GEN
Who do
you have which can show me
that
one?
MAL
Belor
can probably do that best -
we
worked it out with his company
first
- then expanded it to the
rest
of our Batallion.
GEN
All
right - send him over this
afternoon, and we will see how that
goes.
MAL
Done -
I'll have him stop over
after
noon mess.
Gen now leaves the
office....
Mal goes back to
his reports -
Just before noon
mess -
Erica walks into
the office
ERICA
Mal -
we got to talk
MAL
What's
up?
ERICA
Trouble - big time - Ver is not
quite
what he seems!
MAL
(feigning surprise)
Oh?
Tell me about it...
32.
ERICA
Well
it seems that he got this
promotion by brown nosing somebody
upstairs - either that or he's got
something on somebody...
Mal looks a bit
surprised -
He indicates for
Erica to go on..
ERICA
(continuing)
His
last command said - and you
didn't
hear this from me - they
wouldn't have promoted him to the
Garbage Detail - if upper echelons
hadn't
interfered - basically he
was on
his way out - but somebody
pulled
strings and he was promoted -
and so
the 126th just transferred
him
out - to get rid of him - and
so now
we got him....
MAL
That
figures - anything more?
ERICA
Not
right now - but I have a source
who is
pulling his entire records...
MAL
I
thought only Jena could get into
upper
echelons..
ERICA
Nope -
I got connections - um -
thru
the back door as it was....
MAL
Don't
get caught - -
ERICA
Don't
worry - nobody knows what I
am up
to - and my source is not
going
to tell..
MAL
For
now - let's just keep this on
the
back burner - ready for mess?
ERICA
You
are on....
33.
Mal and Erica
leave for noon mess.
FADE OUT.
EXT. DRILL FIELD -
PRESENT ARE THE
THIRD BATALLION, MALACON, AND BELOR AND GENCON.
FADE IN:
The three officers
(Gen, Mal, and Belor) are standing sort
of in the center
of the field, while the men are milling
about around them.
Field uniforms
- all.
GEN
All
right you guys - listen up - we
are
going to try something new -
Major
Malacon and Captain Belor,
are
going to try to teach you a new
formation...
Gencon gestures
towards the other two-
GEN
(continuing)
Gentlemen -
Mal and Belor step
out into the field away from Gencon -
MAL
Good
afternoon Gentlemen - WE are
not a
training command - we are a
working command. Kerricar has asked
us to
show you a few things - so
listen
up, and watch ..
Mal pulls out a
sheaf of papers -
He waves them
around as he speaks-
MAL
According to your training
reports - you have very good Barge
techniques - your lines are a bit
sloppy
- we can work on that - but
the
reason we are here - is to show
you a
new move we worked out.
Mal looks at the
reports as if he was going to extract
something from
them.
He motions to
Belor -
34.
Belor comes over
and looks at the reports with Mal..
Mal speaks to him
in a low tone
MAL
(continuing - quietly
to Belor)
Belor
- don't show them everything -
especially the counter move we made.
BELOR
(quietly to Mal)
Why?
<continue this
dialog as a personal speech not to be heard
by others>
MAL
I
suspect a spy someplace - so
don't
show them the whole scheme.
BELOR
Really?
MAL
Look -
we worked this out by
ourselves - it is our move - just
do the
Black "bag cut off" and not
the
shield wall breach.
BELOR
All
right if you say so.. Mal..
Belor now steps
forward-
BELOR
All
right men - form up into
companies - we will have the "A"
and
"B" companies demonstrate this
move
..
The men from "A"
and "B" form out on the field, opposing
each other - - "C"
and "D" watch from the sidelines.
BELOR
(continuing)
Now I
want you two companies to go
into
an attack mode. - Facing each
other...
"A"
and"B" form up into attack formation
Belor walks down
between the lines -
35.
Straightening them
- making adjustments as he sees fit -
Then stands in the
center of the "battle front"
BELOR
(continuing)
NOW as
you engage each other - push
into
each other - I want the center
to
just start to fall back - like a
fighting retreat - -
Belor starts
pushing and shoving men - to demonstrate what
he means.
Mal joins in and
helps move men about.
BELOR
(continuing)
Now as
you see at this point - the
center
has started to sag just a bit.
Belor and Mal push
the center four men back-
BELOR
(continuing)
Now
let this continue - the outside
men
just from a shield wall to
protect themselves - - like this -
Belor and Mal
demonstrate-
BELOR
(continuing)
Then
start dropping back into your
own
company. - AS the opposite men
come
into the bag - the outside men
cut
them off.
Belor and Mal move
a lot more men into the bag - then start
shoving the
remaining men into position.
BELOR
(continuing)
Now
you have them cut off from
their
own lines - - so all you have
to do
now is have your remaining
companies - protect you while you
finish
them off.
Belor and Mal
demonstrate the cut off and final push.
36.
BELOR
(continuing)
All
right now! - let's do this
slowly
- you guys got the idea?
All the men show
that they got the basic idea.
The troops start
working into each other's lines - and work
on the new move.
After a bit the
remaining "C" and "D" company get to try
this out.
Then the "A"
and "B" work as a group into "C" and "D"
- the
drill is going
well.
During this Gencon
is taking notes - and watching the other
two officers as
they work the lines.
Belor and Mal are
coaching in the midst of the action as
this is all going
on.
Mal notices Gencon
is making far too many notes - -
The men are
finally getting the hang of it.
FADE OUT.
THE SCENE SHIFTS
TO MALACON'S OFFICE - ABOUT A HALF HOUR
AFTER DRILL.
INT. MALACON'S
OFFICE
Field uniforms
- all.
FADE IN:
Belor and Malacon
walk in...
BELOR
So
what was that all about?
MAL
Did
you see Gencon making notes?
BELOR
Yes
and? I thought most officers
did
that..
37.
MAL
Unless
you are new at training
command - you don't need that
detailed notes, and drawings of the
action.
BELOR
You do
know that we didn't show
them
the shield wall breach
technique we found..
MAL
I know
- that's the surprise for them.
BELOR
Surprise?
MAL
Kerri
suspects we may have a spy -
and if
my guess is right - they
won't
know the trick - therefore it
will
still work.
BELOR
What
will work?
MAL
Our
bag cut off and wall breach.
BELOR
But we
didn't show them the breach--
MAL
Very
good old friend - now you
know -
this will work for a bit
without it - but if we suspect a
counter move - then we know that we
were
found out. YOU don't let the
enemy
see your battle plans.
BELOR
All
right! - See you at evening mess?
MAL
Ya -
be there in a bit.
Belor leaves - Mal
- is left deep in his own thoughts.
Jena - barracks
uniform
Jena enters-
JENA
Evening Mal - ready for dinner?
38.
MAL
Ya -
so what have you been up to
this
afternoon? I didn't see you
around
much..
JENA
As you
always say - "Things to do,
and
all that"
MAL
So out
with what you have been up to...
JENA
Well I
was poking around - Ver is
very
upset with you for some
reason
- and he may make thing hot
in our
next fight..
MAL
Oh?
JENA
Just a
rumor I guess - what
happened this morning?
MAL
Well
he got steamed up over
something and stormed out of here ..
and I
don't know where he went..
JENA
Well I
heard he was up at Kerri's
making
a complaint - seems you are
trying
to take over the Corps or
something like that
MAL
It
sounds like something he would
do -
and then what happened?
JENA
I
guess Kerri threw him out of his
office
- and last time he was seen
he was
sulking over in his office -
which
is where I overheard him
railing about you - and how he
wouldn't support you next time
things
got hot.
MAL
Which
is why we have to be sharper
than
we are now. I have a funny
feeling that our next fight may be
crucial..
39.
Mal looks out the
window - and notices that the sun is low -
MAL
(continuing)
Ready
for evening mess?
JENA
Sure!
- Let's go and get something
to
eat.
MAL
Which
reminds me - you seen Erica
this
afternoon? Or any time today?
JENA
Last
time I saw her - she was at
Archives - looking for some
tactical thing or other......
MAL
All
right, I guess we will catch up
with
her later...
Mal changes out of
his field uniform,into a barracks uniform.
Jena and Mal leave
for evening mess..
FADE OUT.
ABOUT A WEEK
LATER.
LATE ONE
AFTERNOON, A MESSENGER ARRIVES
INT. MALACON'S
OFFICE
Barracks
uniforms - all.
FADE IN:
JENA
Mal -
a messenger for you!
MAL
Thanks
Jena -
The messenger
comes in, salutes - gives Mal the sealed packet -
salutes -
leaves.
Mal opens the
note-
40.
MAL
(continuing - reading
the note)
Hmmmmm
- something funny here...
Jena -
I will be going out this
evening.
JENA
Can I
come with you?
MAL
No! -
and don't ask why.
JENA
All
right! - Can I see the note?
MAL
If you
insist-
Mal hands her the
note - -
<seen on
camera>
To- Malan - info
/ map / details / road house / ten pm /
danger //ss// D.
JENA
So
what does it mean?
MAL
You
will find out shortly enough.
FADE OUT.
MAL CHANGES
INTO HIS "BLACK" UNIFORM JUST AFTER SUNSET, AND
SLIPS OUT OF CAMP
- AND INTO THE BLACK TERRITORY
INT. SAME ROAD
HOUSE AS LAST MEETING WITH DEROD.
Mal enters the
road house, orders a drink, and looks around.
>>From what
anybody could tell, he's just another Black
footman out for
the night.
Derod is not in
the place.
About ten-thirty
Derod appears in the doorway - and gives a
signal -
"outside".
Mal finishes his
drink, and steps out the door.
41.
DEROD
(slightly seeming afraid)
Mal -
I think I'm being followed -
MAL
You
bring the stuff?
DEROD
Yes -
it's right here in this
packet... you bring the payment?
MAL
Let me
check it first -
Mal opens the
packet - it looks good - lots of details and a
map -
He reaches into
his pocket - and pulls out a large handful
of coins.
Counts out fifteen
more, and hands them to Derod.
MAL
(continuing)
Thanks
old friend - now slip out of
town
by the river, and you should
be all
right.
DEROD
(growing more afraid)
Mal -
I think they are on to me - -
MAL
All
right - when dawn breaks - slip
over
to the Realm, and give them
this...
Mal pulls out a
special coin with something written on it
Derod can't read.
DEROD
What
is this?
MAL
Your
safe passage - now go - I hear
the
watch coming!
Mal slips into a
nearby alleyway just as the local night
watch passes, then
slips out of Black Territory with his
package.
FADE OUT.
42.
MAL RETURNS TO
OKTECK - AND SLIPS BACK INTO CAMP - MAKING IT
BACK TO HIS
BARRACKS WITHOUT ANY FURTHER PROBLEMS.
INT. MAL'S
BARRACKS
Mal - Black
until shed - then Barracks - Erica - barracks
uniform
FADE IN:
Upon entering his
quarters, Erica is sitting there waiting
for him.
Erica is sitting
on the bed.
Mal enters...
ERICA
So our
spy has returned! - OR are
you a
Black footman looking for a
maiden
to ravish?
MAL
Very
funny Erica -
(pulling off his
Black uniform and disguise.)
Mal changes into
his Barracks uniform..
Mal comes over to
the bed with the packet..
MAL
(continuing)
I'll
ravish you later - for now we
got
something to look at.
ERICA
What
is it Mal?
MAL
My
packet - from my own operative.....
Mal now opens the
packet in full light -
Out comes a very
detailed map, and several pages of information.
Mal reads through
the paper work and looks at the map as he
is reading
Erica is very
interested-
43.
ERICA
Where
did you get this? This is the
Black
battle plans!!
MAL
I know
- it cost me a few coins -
but we
have it all.....
ERICA
Is it
dependable?
MAL
My man
has never let me down
before
- just the same - we should
go
over this carefully....
ERICA
Well
let me see it - if it matches
their
tactics - it probably is valid.
MAL
Just
what I was hoping for..
He turns and looks
directly in Erica's eyes -
MAL
(continuing)
Which
reminds me - what did you
find
at Archives?
ERICA
Well
you were right - there is a
long
trail - and it isn't pretty -
I'll
fill you in later - this is
too
exciting not to work on now.
Mal and Erica go
over the contents of the packet -
After about an
hour of study -
Jena barracks
uniform-
Jena returns
JENA
Am I
bothering you two?
ERICA
Oh no!
We were just going through
these
things... and....
MAL
Why
don't we knock off for the
night
Erica?
44.
ERICA
Probably a good idea - get a fresh
start
in the morning..
Erica now
leaves,taking the packet with her to her
quarters.....to
study..
Jena now slips
onto the bed next to Mal....
JENA
Long
day partner... ready for bed?
Mal looks lovingly
into Jena's deep blue eyes...
MAL
Mmmm -
Jena - you have such lovely
blue
eyes...
Out lining her
face, draws her in for a kiss..
JENA
Oh Mal
- .. ....
Mal slips his hand
into her tunic,
It parts....
He cups her
breast..
JENA
(continuing)
Mmmm -
I love that when you do that..
Stroking her
gently,
Their lips locked
in a very deep kiss..
She slips her
tunic open further -
Pulls Mal into
her...
Kissing him
deeply, she opens his tunic....
Both drop them to
the floor..
Jena is opening
her pant...
Mal helps - then
slips it off her...
Jena opens his . .
Slides it off - -
Strokes his
manhood . .
45.
JENA
I love
you this way....
His hand works
it's way down her smooth belly -
Outlining her
navel -
JENA
Mal
that tickles.....
She just parts her
legs to let his hand slip in...
Finding her mark -
Rubs her gently
until she blows in her first climax..
She rolls onto her
back -
Pulls him over
her...
JENA
Mal -
come run me thru with your
sword!!!
MAL
Yes my
Lady!
Jena parts her
legs - to draw him deeply within...
JENA
Mmmm -
I love that - deeper!
MAL
Yes my
Lady!
JENA
Harder!
Jena is panting
wildly -
In time with Mal's
thrusts...
After a few
moments, Jena blows in her climax...
Mal seeing her let
go - does so as well...
MAL
I love
you Jena...
JENA
Love
you too Mal - my Knight!
Another long
session of rubbing, holding,
46.
Running hands thru
the hair, stroking.....
Then they retire
for the night.
Wrapped in each
other's arms....
FADE OUT.
IT IS NOW A COUPLE
OF DAYS LATER - - MALACON IS OUT WATCHING
THE PRACTICE FIELD
-
EXT. DRILL FIELD
Field uniforms
all - Brenecon - barracks uniform -
FADE IN:
Jena comes running
up to him -
JENA
(shouting excitedly)
Mal -
- - Mal - - -
MAL
Jena-
? Whats up?
JENA
Mal -
something has gone wrong -
Kernin
just showed up at Kerri's
office
hot about something
diplomatic.....!!!
MAL
Ut -
oh!!!
Hot on Jena's
heels - Mal sees Eagle Brenecon coming in his
direction-
<Brenecon is
Kerri's first officer>
BRENECON
(shouting as he gets
in range)
Mal!!
- Major Malacon!
MAL
(turns to Jena -
quietly says)
Jena -
I think I know - go and get
Erica,
and tell her to get the
thing
- and you two show up in
Keri's
office fast...
Brenecon reaches
where Mal is standing..
47.
BRENECON
Major!! - Your presence is required
in
Commander Kerricar's office at once!
MAL
So now
what did I do?
BRENECON
Commander Kerricar will discuss
that
with you when you get there - -
COME
WITH ME - - NOW!!!
Mal and Brenecon
walk over to Kerri's office - -
DISSOLVE TO:
INT. KERRI'S
OFFICE
Kerri and
Kernin - dress uniforms.
FADE IN:
Upon entering Keri
and Grand Commander Kernin are standing
there looking
stern.
The two juniors
enter - salute
The brass returns
the salute
KERRI
Major
Malacon, Commander Kernin has
something he wants to ask you....
where
have you been the past few
nights?
MAL
Out on
the town - - why?
KERRI
You
didn't go anyplace else?
MAL
I
might have - what's the problem?
KERNIN
The
PROBLEM MAJOR is this - they
caught
what they think was a spy - -
and he
had a bunch of gold coins in
his
pocket. Sort of a big haul for
a
retired Black footman - wouldn't
you
say?
48.
MAL
Ut - -
oh....
KERNIN
And in
the pile of gold coins was
one
which they couldn't figure out.....
Kernin pulls out
the coin - - -
KERNIN
(continuing)
It
seems they were wondering if we
knew
what the inscriptions were -
as it
looked like something from
the
Realm..they sent it along with
the
diplomatic protest - -
something about spying - - and if
we
could tell them who the
spymaster was from this coin? Or if
it was
not one of our men?
Kernin tosses the
coin to Mal...
KERNIN
It
took us awhile - to figure out
who's
inscription this is - but
it's
yours - Malacon - it's your
identity coin from the Realm......
Mal turns the coin
over and over - and looks surprised..
MAL
Mine?
KERNIN
Where
is your Realm identification
as an
officer?
Mal rustles thru
his pockets - - no coin
MAL
Must
have lost it one the past few
nights
- - I guess - you know how
people
pick things up . .
KERNIN
Oh!
Come on now - Kerri and I both
know
you have had a spy ring
running in the Black Territory - so
out
with it!!
Just then Jena and
Erica enter-
49.
KERRI
Not
now ladies - this is important -
later..
ERICA
My
Lordships - this is more
important -
Erica produces the
spy packet Mal had brought back.
The two senior
officers look stunned at what comes out of
the packet..
KERRI
My
lord! This is the Black battle
plans
- maps and all..
KERNIN
So
this is where you have been
Malacon...
MAL
Busted
I guess..... what happened
to
Derod?
KERNIN
MY spy
says he was caught by the
night
watch .......
MAL
Must
have been the watch I eluded..
KERNIN
Yes,
well - and anyway - they
executed him.
MAL
Derod
thought he was being
followed - so I guess....
(Mal looks sadly and
deeply in thought)
I had
let old Derod use my coin as
a safe
passage into the realm - so
he
could get out of the Black
territory.....he just wanted to do
just
one more job......
MAL
So now
what happens?
50.
KERRI
Well
you are a good officer - so I
guess
we will find some way of
covering your story about losing
the
coin, and their man just
finding it... and let it go at that.
KERNIN
Well
let's look at what your
playing spy has at least brought us...
All present now
start examining the map - and plotting it on
the larger wall
map - as the details come forth.
KERNIN
(continuing)
Well
you three seem to have the
handle
on this - why don't you tell
us
what is up?
MAL
Well I
had suspected this from the
beginning but let's let my Tac tell
it-
ERICA
Well
gentlemen - it goes like
this -
the 210th and the 214th are
planning to raid the town of Beri -
near
Nestike - the 210th is to lead
the
raid - and hold back just a bit
so a
Corps responding will have
time
to come in.
Erica indicates on
the map as she continues
ERICA
(continuing)
Then
the 214th is to await in the
Nestike Forest surrounding the
town -
and ambush it when it comes
thru
the forest.
JENA
But we
have another idea..
MAL
Kerri
- this is where the three
Corps
come in..
51.
JENA
We
know the dates - and all the
rest
and their positioning from the
map -
SO - here's what we do - WE
place
2 Corps - North and south -
so we
can cover both entrances...
ERICA
And
the middle....
KERNIN
Where
do you think the other two
should
be?
JENA
I
would place them at Notle and
Jelia
-
She indicates on
the map
JENA
(continuing)
Just
inside the forest.
KERNIN
I
couldn't have made a better
plan -
well done - - - Kerri - get
ready
- we have about a week before
this
is to begin - I want YOU to
lead
the center force.
KERRI
Yes
Sir! - who's flanking us?
KERNIN
Beldon
of the 17th 245th to the
North
- and Sherdin of the 18th
630th
to the South.
Kernin studies the
map - and smiles - his junior officers
have done it again
- -
KERNIN
(continuing)
Good
work all of you - I'll take
the
heat off this small item - -
Mal -
don't do this again unless
somebody in upper echelons knows
about
it - especially intelligence
,,
(Kernin winks at Mal)
Just
be careful old man - I have
lost
too many good promising
officers by doing this... all right?
52.
MAL
Thank
you sir! - I'll be careful
FADE OUT.
END OF ACT 3
ACT 4 - INTO THE NIGHT
AFTER EVENING
MESS, THE SMALL GROUP OF OFFICERS FROM THE
SECOND BATALLION
MEET BACK IN MAL'S QUARTERS..
Barracks
uniforms - all.
INT. MAL'S
BARRACKS
The group now
forms up - and some kind of battle plan has to
be worked out -
but first - there is the problem of whom is
spying - and how
it is getting out.....
FADE IN:
As they trudge in
from mess - -
MAL
Man!
That was close - I thought
they
were going to really bust us
for
this one!
ERICA
Well
we just dodged that charge -
if
this had not produced something -
-
JENA
Yes -
if we didn't have the goods -
I
think we'd all be sitting in one
of the
discipline command quarters
by
now.
ERICA
Mal -
we - um - skip it - Let's
just
take Kernin's advise - and
cool
it off for awhile..
53.
MAL
Why?
We are officers - and we have
to
protect our Corps - so - I don't
remember anything about not
spying
- or gathering information
at
Caer Anne...
JENA
Well -
let's just be more careful
from
now on, and cover our behinds
a bit
closer....
As this group is
talking - the other two members of the
staff arrive ..
MAL
Ah!
Our two missing members have
returned from leave!
JENA
Welcome back !! - So how is the
Summer
Lands?
< Vironica
(VIRON) and Ellison (ELLIE) are Mal's First and
Engineering
officers..>
Viron and Ellie
- dress uniforms.
ELLIE
It was
Grand! We really needed a
rest
Mal - next time you will have
to go
with us.
The two incoming
officers drop their belongings, and remove
their cloaks, and
outer gear - and hang them up in their
armoires..
As this dialog
continues-
VIRON
So how
are things back at home?
Keeping the fires burning?
MAL
Well
things are heating up - we
have a
battle coming with the Black
210th
and 214th - and we have
another problem brewing..
VIRON
So
what's the dope..
54.
ERICA
Well
Mal's spy ring has produced
the
battle plans for a coming fight
with
the Black forces - and we
think
we have a spy in our midst....
VIRON
Spy?
If you ask me there are a lot
more
than one..
MAL
So
what do you know about this?
VIRON
Well
if you ask me . . I have
suspected that we were being sold
out a
long time ago - - remember
the
Frange River Expedition?
MAL
Yes -
and we got a thrashing at
that
one..
VIRON
Well
one of the sub-commanders was
Gencon
- then Gense - remember? And
he
really didn't do much to stop
the
incoming Black Footmen - - his
two
companies were wiped out - but
he
escaped - we still don't know
how -
but none the less - he got
out
that scrape - THEN there was
there
was the Dakto Ridge - when we
were
with the old 325th - remember Mal?
MAL
Dakto
Ridge? Gad that was a very
long
time ago - we had just made
Sargents - - if I remember - Verlis
/ now
Vercan was our company
commander..
VIRON
Very
good - remember how he pulled
his
staff out of the line of fire -
and we
almost got wiped out? It was
out
small group - you, me - and
Kian,
and Anna? - We were the sole
survivors of that run in....where
was
Vercan?
MAL
Boy!
You sure got a long memory -
55.
JENA
And
that's not all Viron - there
are
other things in his background .
MAL
Oh?
JENA
He
also ran from or was just a hair
from
getting captured at Second
Argathian . . somehow he got out of
the
Black lines - and made his
escape
- unharmed - I might add -
if
that wasn't unusual...
ELLIE
So
tell me Mal - Why are you and
Vercan
the same grade and rank?
MAL
Well
Ellie - it's like this - He
has
been busted and disciplined
several times, and that puts one
back a
bit..
ELLIE
And
you don't think that there is
an
animosity between you two?
MAL
I hope
not - it's wasn't my fault
he got
the brownie points - in fact
I was
out of his command when that
went
down..
VIRON
Yes,
we were well out his range -
at the
Academy at the time...
ERICA
And
Gen has a long checkered
history as well - not only the mess
at
Frange - but his next command at
the
212th - he pulled another off
at
Gesto River . . the same thing -
lost
most of his company -but
somehow just managed to escape..
also
unharmed - or touched - Funny?
Isn't
it?
MAL
Yes it
sure seems so - and now we
have
this coming fight - you think
we may
be in for the same thing?
56.
JENA
I
wouldn't be surprised - especially
after
what I overheard Ver
screaming about not supporting you..
MAL
So
what do we do? We haven't got
positive proof - but we do have
their
record...
JENA
For me
- I would just keep my eyes
open -
if this thing collapses -
lets
just get out of there - and
pull
as much of the Second out with
us - -
ERICA
And
let the Black forces do the
dirty
work..
MAL
Erica?
ERICA
Look
Mal - if they got out of there
in one
piece before - they can do
it
again -no reason we have to go
down
with them - -
JENA
Or
just let the Black forces finish
them
off - Looking at their plans -
they
really wouldn't know who is
where
- - if we keep this quiet,
that
we know...
ERICA
After
all only Kerri and Kernin and
us
know what is exactly going on,
and I
don't think they will let on
to the
rest of the Corps - seeing
how
they suspect a spy -
MAL
So you
think they will let us be
the
whole Corps?
ERICA
I
wouldn't surprise me -
57.
VIRON
At the
Bark River Foray - Kernin
let
almost half his Corps get
mauled
- because he suspected a
spy -
and let the Black forces do
the
dirty work of eliminating the
problem
JENA
Umm -
yes I do remember something
about
that - there was a big to-do
over
it, and I think it was
Kernin's last field command..
ELLIE
Yes it
was Kernin's last - then
Kerri
was appointed to his old
spot... you wonder??? IF????
VIRON
I hope
not - we may be into this
deeper
than we think...
MAL
You
think they may be planning that
right
now?
ERICA
Wouldn't surprise me.....
Suddenly there is
a knock at the door-
Belor enters-
Barracks
uniform.
BELOR
(excitedly)
Mal -
something's up!
MAL
Now
what?
BELOR
I just
saw a Black footman coming
out of
First Batallion's barracks....
MAL
Ut - -
oh
JENA
Well I
guess that confirms that
58.
ERICA
Belor
- keep quiet about this - get
our
other three Captains over
here -
as quietly as you can - and
bring
Brenecon with you as well..
Belor leaves -
MAL
All
right now what do we do?
ERICA
My
guess is just do our best -
let's
lay this out for Brenecon,
and
let him make some sort of
decisions about the mess.
MAL
I
agree - this isn't our Corps - -
(wink-)
So
let's let the brass take some of
the
heat.
FADE OUT.
IT IS NOW ABOUT AN
HOUR LATER.
INT. MAL'S
BARRACKS
The group now
slowly starts to assemble in Mal's barracks-
FADE IN:
MAL
Well
everybody is here . . where's
Brenecon?
BELOR
Right
behind us - he had something
to
attend to - and said he's be
here
shortly...
Brenecon now
enters-
Barracks
uniform.
BRENECON
So -
what has this group of
conspirators come up with?
MAL
We
think we got it all figured out..
59.
BRENECON
Oh?
MAL
Well
it's like this - from the past
performance record - we think our
spies
are Gencon and Vercan - - and
Belor
saw a Black footman leaving
Vercan's quarters about an hour ago..
BRENECON
(rather upset)
Why
didn't somebody raise the alarm?
MAL
Would
it have made a difference?
BRENECON
Well
yes it would have - we could
have
blown this wide open.
MAL
So we
exposed two spies - and then
what
would have happened?
BRENECON
They
would be dealt with - -
ERICA
Oh -
like they were before?
BRENECON
What
do you mean?
ERICA
The
records show that something
happened in their past commands -
and
the problems were swept under a
rug -
and the spies - er - officers
were
transferred out to other
commands - - which is how we ended
up
with them..
BRENECON
And
why do you think so...
JENA
Just
look at the past record
Jena now pulls out
the work she and Erica had been digging thru.
Brenecon looks at
the paper work...
60.
BRENECON
I
see......
Just then the door
opens.
Kerri walks in....
Black field
uniform - no insignia.
KERRI
At
ease - WELL I see the cat is out
of the
proverbial bag -
MAL
(looking surprised)
Commander Kerricar - nice to see
you -
err - what's up?
KERRI
Mal
you know why I am here - so
don't
feign surprise..
He indicates to
all to sit down -
KERRI
(continuing)
Brenecon - you didn't see any of
this
happening - or know about this
meeting..
BRENECON
Sir?
KERRI
Look -
this Corps was formed for
many
reasons - one of which was to
ferret
out some spies - the other
was to
find out who was good enough
for
further command. -
The group now
really looks mystified-
KERRI
(continuing)
Upper
echelons have known for quite
some
time - all that you have
figured out - now we just had to do
something about it. So we thought
up
this plan. Mal's spy ring
provided the final piece of the
puzzle
- and now we are ready to
act......
Mal looks
justified in his actions, and smiles.
61.
MAL
You
mean this was all for nothing?
That
command already knew about
most
of this?
KERRI
No Mal
- it wasn't for nothing - we
just
needed to get the players on
the
same field - and let them
expose
themselves - - that Black
footman Belor saw - -
JENA
(cutting him off)
Nobody
told you about that...
KERRI
This
camp is full of spies - both
kinds
- good - bad - and Black -
and
you never know who is watching
whom..
MAL
You
don't trust us?
KERRI
It is
not a matter of trust - this
is a
special case. We knew things
were
going bad in this sector - we
didn't
know why.
ERICA
So
where was intelligence in all of
this?
If they are supposedly so good?
ELLIE
Intelligence? If you ask me - they
couldn't figure their way out of,..
KERRI
(Cutting her off)
Intelligence can do only so much -
sometimes you have to let the game
run -
then spring the trap . .
which
is what we are going to do here.
MAL
So
fill us in....
62.
KERRI
Kernin
knows more than I can tell
you -
but understand this - we have
known
quite a bit about all of you
for
some time - Mal was suspected
because of his spy ring - the other
two
for a similar reason - but Mal
never
let the Corps be destroyed
because of his actions - SO we
brought all of you into the same
group
and let things progress at
their
own rate.
VIRON
So now
what is our fate?
KERRI
Well -
there is a coming fight - as
you
know - and as you already
know -
you have the inside
information - which I will not
share
with the others. I know this
means
we will lose part of a
Corps
- but this has to be.
BRENECON
(looks aghast)
You
are going to sacrifice two
Battalions?
KERRI
Two -
maybe three - Yes, that is
the
orders from upstairs. Sorry. In
order
to get rid of the spies
without a diplomatic to-do - we
have
to do it this way. Otherwise
the
Black forces would raise a
major
protest.
BRENECON
(still aghast)
What
about the men?
KERRI
The
men? Look around you - these
are
the survivors of their
handiwork these and other officers
and
men have survived - because
they
were good - this is also a way
to get
rid of the shirks - and it
also
provides us with a way to
discipline the troops - you do not
spy or
sell out - without
consequences. Not all spies are
officers Brenecon.
63.
VIRON
So
what is the plan Commander?
KERRI
Bring
out your maps - and I'll
explain the whole thing - and our
own
hidden surprise - you didn't
think
of..
Maps and the Black
orders come of their hiding places-
Kerri goes over
the plans with the people standing around.
Kerri also shows
the new wrinkle that wasn't in the original
plan.....
KERRI
(continuing)
...and
then we move the other two
Corps
slowly down the forest...
Indicating on the
map - -
KERRI
(continuing)
And
that's just about it for right now!
The group looks
satisfied....
KERRI
(continuing)
Brenecon - you don't know anything
about
this - at the briefing at the
end of
the week - keep silent about
the
Second Batallion's own role in
this
upcoming fight.
BRENECON
YES
SIR! -
FADE OUT.
END OF ACT 4
64.
ACT 5 - PRELUDE
THE FOLLOWING
FRIDAY MORNING, AFTER MORNING MESS, THE
OFFICER'S MESS
HALL IS CONVERTED INTO AN INTELLIGENCE
BRIEFING ROOM -
INT. OFFICER'S
MESS HALL
The whole Officer
Corps of the 26th 730th VKC is assembled
for an
intelligence briefing.
A raised platform
is slid from the wall, and is now the dais
on which the
briefing officer will address the assembled.
The Officer Corps
is seated, like a large audience.
Barracks
uniforms - all
FADE IN:
Brenecon leads the
way - with Kerri following behind - a
couple of other
officers from Keri's command (non speaking)
also enter -
BRENECON
Ten -
hutt!
KERRI
At
ease gentlemen-
Kerri surveys the
room - all seem present-
KERRI
(continuing)
As you
already know from rumors -
there
is a big job coming. The
rumors
have worked out to be true.
We
have been assigned to work part
of
this along with a few other
Corps.
Eagle Brenecon will fill you
in on
the details..
Brenecon takes
center stage.
A large map is
rolled out
It has several
flags, and other markings on it.
BRENECON
Good
morning gentlemen -
Brenecon turns and
looks at the map.
He then picks up a
pointer.
65.
BRENECON
(continuing)
Our
outposts, and scouting parties
have
located a large group of Black
Forces
moving in our direction. It
is
composed of the Black 210th, and
214th
Battle groups.
He turns and
indicates on the map as he speaks.
BRENECON
(continuing)
They
were last seen in this area of
the
Derviges River in their
Territory, heading for the Nestike
Forest. Due to the fact that they
have
not made a definite turn
toward
the Realm, Command is
sending three Corps to intercept
them
when they cross our boarders.
Indicates on the
map again-
BRENECON
(continuing)
The
first will be the 18th 630th
Corps
lead by Commander Sherdin, at
Jelia.
He indicates-
BRENECON
(continuing)
The
second will be the 26th 730th
Corps
lead by Commander Kerricar,
at
Beri.
He indicates
BRENECON
(continuing)
The
third will be the 17th 245th
Corps
lead by Commander Beldon, at
Notle.
He indicates
BRENECON
(continuing)
This
gives us a spread of about
THIRTY
miles wide - in which we can
cut
them off.
(MORE)
66.
BRENECON (CONT'D)
As you
know in the past, the Black
forces
have launched several major
raids
from this boarder area. We
intend
this to be their last. One
last
item - the Black forces are
being
lead by a new command
officer - a Major Duroc. We don't
know
anything about him, nor his
tactics. So be on your guard for
new
formations or tricks. Over to
Commander Kerricar-
Kerri takes center
stage
Another map is
rolled out
This one is the
center of the Nestike Forest-
KERRI
All
right gentlemen - you have the
basic
layout - now here's our part.
Kerry looks around
the room again
KERRI
(continuing)
Major
Vercan and the first
batallion will be flanked out along
this
valley to Beri - here - about
one
mile south of Malacon's second.
Vercan
- stay on top of the valley
rise.
He indicates on
the map.